Fable's sections in draft 10's still look: one tilted photo, a fixed ticker, and Spin a swirl that picks right away.
6 Google reviewsInside the shopOrder pickup bagSoda · Float · BuildFull footerSpin a swirlShort: 6 of 20 shownSteady: 0 shift
Twisted Spoons · draft review · Nov 12
Five drafts, side by side
Your two Fable builds, plus the three best of the other 19 drafts on the index. Each shows the top of the page on a desktop and a phone. Judged on what you said you like: short sections like Fable, Google reviews, the shop photos, order pickup, a strong footer, the drinks and fun touches like Spin a swirl.
Same sections with draft 12's motion: swipe-through photos, a slot-machine spin, a moving ticker and tap-the-cereal at the bottom.
6 Google reviewsInside the shopOrder pickup bagSoda · Float · BuildFull footerSpin reel + gamesShort: 6 of 20 shownSteady: 0 shift
The most complete of the rest. Three ticket-stub photos with prices sell the soda, the Campfire and the energy float before you scroll, and orders print onto a draft receipt you show at the counter. It runs long, because all 20 signatures and every topping are listed open.
6 Google reviewsInside the shopOrder pickup receiptSoda · Float · BuildFull footerNo spinLong: all 20 openSteady: looked still
The warmest look of the lot: navy and yellow, a turning text ring around the photo, a ticker, and a 5-star quote right in the top section. It has the reviews, the shop photos and a sticky Order pickup bar on phones. It's the longest page (8 sections) and is a Flutter app, which loads slower and is harder for Google to read.
6 Google reviews + 5.0 sealShop photosOrder pickup barSoda · Float · BuildFooter: socials not confirmedRing + ticker, no spinLong: 8 sectionsSteady: looked still
The tightest page with a spin. "Let the cereal decide" picks a signature and adds it, and the real Campfire photo leads in pink, yellow and black. Sections fold up short. Its weak spot is reviews: only 2 quotes, not credited to Google.
Only 2 quotesShop photos (3)Order pickup bagSoda · Float · BuildFooterSpin to pickShort: 6 of 20 shownSteady: looked still
How they stack up
| Draft | Google reviews | Inside the shop | Order pickup | Drinks | Footer | Fun | Short |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Fable + 10 | 6 quotes | 5 photos | Bag + options | All | Full | Spin | Yes |
| Fable + 12 | 6 quotes | 5 photos | Bag + options | All | Full | Spin reel, swipe, game | Yes |
| #21 Blue Spoon Fable | 6 quotes | 4 photos | Draft receipt | All | Full | Ticket stubs | No |
| #15 Blue Spoon Ticket | 6 + seal | Yes | Sticky bar | All | Not checked | Ring, ticker | No |
| #17 Cereal Pop Astra | 2 quotes | 3 photos | Bag | All | Full | Spin | Yes |
The rest of the drafts
| # | Draft | Why it didn't make the cut |
|---|---|---|
| 6 | Neon | Couldn't be captured; the page never stopped changing, which is a Steady Screen worry. |
| 7 | Black Badge | Complete but the plainest of the Flutter set. |
| 8 | Cereal Pop | Fun colors, but busy, and the number row wraps on desktop. #14 fixes it. |
| 9 | Black Badge v2 | Close 4th. Polished, but one reviewer name is cut off and the black feels less like the shop. |
| 11 | Black Badge Motion | A full-screen loader holds the page for several seconds on phones. |
| 13 | Black Badge One Shot | The hero photo is cut off at the fold on desktop. |
| 14 | Cereal Pop Spin | Fun icing drips, but it's the same family as 10 and 12, and no spin showed up in the parts we checked. |
| 16 | Black Badge Astra | Clean, but only 2 quotes and no fun touch. |
| 18 | Blue Spoon Astra | Quietest of the set, and the ticket label text wraps awkwardly. |
| 19 | Black Badge Fable | As complete as #21, but long and no fun touches. |
| 22 | Black Badge Sol | Only 2 quotes, and it uses stock cereal photos that aren't the shop's. |
| 23 | Cereal Pop Sol | Has a spin wheel, but uses stock photos, has 2 quotes and has clipped sticker text. |
| 24 | Blue Spoon Sol | Plainest of its group, with stock photos. |
| 25 | Black Badge Astra 2 | Opens on drinks, not ice cream, and only 2 quotes. |
| 26 | Cereal Pop Astra 2 | Spin and search, but the top photos look pasted on white boxes. |
| 27 | Blue Spoon Astra 2 | Busy top section, and no ice cream photo up front. |
Shots taken Nov 12. Phone shots of the other drafts are 500 wide because the review browser can't go narrower; a real 390 phone will look a little tighter. "Looked still" means nothing moved between two shots 4 seconds apart; only Fable + 10 and Fable + 12 had the full Steady Screen test. Nothing on any live site was changed.